In order to keep track of what we have done so far and what we have left still to shoot, I went through my notes and higlighted the lines we haven't recorded anything for yet. I then categorised the lines into location categories. This way I can comprehend easier roughly how long each section should take, and therefore which sections will take an entire filming session and which we can combine. Doing this also showed that we have a lot more to do.
Bedroom
"Won't make you many friends" - sat at a desk screwing up paper into balls and throwing them at a caged, already-full bin
"I'm just another thing for you to roll your eyes at honey,you might have him, but I always get the last word" - (see storyboard for details)
Diary
"The story starts when it was hor and it was summer and, I had it all I had him right there where I wanted him" - High angle in field, inventive camera work - a mix-match of shots
"I never saw it coming"
"Soon she's gunna find"
"And, she thinks I'm psycho cos I like to rhyme her name with things" - Wide eyes, camera revolved around her head and focuses on the writing on the diary pages. Possible jump cuts here?
"Soon she's gunna find" - looking up from the diary
"She took him faster than you can say sabotage" - Slam diary shut, looking more upset and tearful than angry
Band
"Nor did I suspected it"
"She's not a saint"
"Oh they don't teach you that in prep school"
"She's not a saint, and she's not what you think"
"There is nothing I do better than revenge"
"Woah" (after "but I always get the last word")
"On the playground"
"There is nothing I do better than"
"Let's hear the applause"
"Cos you're so much better"
Taxi
"Revenge" - Getting into taxi, very drunk
"Cause I don't think you do" - blurred - sped up footage from out the window (dark, lights) Zooms out to reveal my face
"Oh" - Jump cut
"Do you still feel like you know what you're doing" - Face-on to camera, singing into the lens, clear that she's drunk
"I don't think you do, I don't think you do" - Looks down, still miming, nearly crying/crying
Prom
"C'mon show me how much better you are" - Walking behind Amy "COME ON!"
"See you deserve some applause" - Face on tp Tayler, clapping, aggressive
Turns up at the prom, completely drunk, a mess. Rhys looks concerned, feeling guilty. Blackout as a door slams - The end
Corridor
"She lives her life like it's a party and she's on the list" - either at a real party, or we'll compose one in a concrete, indoor school corridor to imitate one
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